What he thought was tulak hord was a soldier he had put in his own armor as a decoy....for tulak had left for his main ship up above
Nope, this is just for fun. You can post what ever you want to.
A rebel fleet surrounds the asian star destroyer, firing on it
Xins son observes the battle. Claiming his prize. Avenging his father.
Tie fighters pour out of the Destroyer and retaliate against the rebel scum. "Darth Tulak," said the ancient sith, "After your vacation...What do you think should be the fate of this planet?"
And as Tula looked in at the planet, he said: this is my swamp now
Before he could finish.....a small group of Calvary emerged from the forest the the east....by the look of them one could see these were no mere soldiers....on the banner was a
Xins son who had evolve to have cybernetic abilities. He had become a Jedi master with 100 Jedi
His second in command, homerius simpson, looks on at the destroyer
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"Is that so?" Said the Sith lord as he took his finger off the 'Annihilate Planet' button.
He knew xins son was too powerful. He retreated.
Xin jr then created a powerful empire.